Word to the wise...

Don't solicit for leniency because it's your first flash. By doing that you're just asking to get deliberately bad marks.

It was bad.

You have the right idea here, the execution is just weak at best.

I liked that.

It was well directed. I like how you made the clocks get their asses kicked believably. Oh well, I don't share your hatred for them though.

Not bad.

The graphics were a bit lame, especially the backdrops. I like the use of 3-D to vector in this one, but you might want to invest a little more time into making the Poser models more detailed. The backdrops were lame as hell and the music was a little anti-climactic, plus I didn't like the effects very much, so I give it a so-so.

Nice hair.

I like the hair, but unfortunately that doesn't save the fact that there's nothing too it. Nice hair though.