Word to the wise...
Don't solicit for leniency because it's your first flash. By doing that you're just asking to get deliberately bad marks.
It was bad.
You have the right idea here, the execution is just weak at best.
I liked that.
It was well directed. I like how you made the clocks get their asses kicked believably. Oh well, I don't share your hatred for them though.
Pretty damn cool.
I liked it, honestly. No problems with pacing, very exciting, nice graphics, unique cool style, kinda' reminded me of Rayman. My only suggestions would be change the music up from time to time, try to make the animations smoother and make your backgrounds more interesting. Otherwise, nice job.
Your engine isn't bad, but you need something that will draw the attention of your players. Your music is too drab for this sort of thing and it takes away from the action. As for the animations, there needs to be more action, more excitement and when you kill someone you need to KNOW, meaning sound, blood, flailing limbs, whatever you have to do. Good start though.
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